Oh wow, another wonderful chapter. And not only do I love this story and how it's developing I love how it's structure in the chapters. Sort of broken up and stoccato. And we only see these small moments between them because these are the important scenes.
That single sentence on how they still hadn't kissed. Oh, shivers.
There had better be a lot of comfort for our boys after all this hurt. :)
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Date: 2010-07-16 08:58 pm (UTC)And not only do I love this story and how it's developing I love how it's structure in the chapters. Sort of broken up and stoccato. And we only see these small moments between them because these are the important scenes.
That single sentence on how they still hadn't kissed. Oh, shivers.
There had better be a lot of comfort for our boys after all this hurt. :)